http://duckduckcaboose.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] duckduckcaboose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] colliemommie 2008-07-24 10:53 pm (UTC)

The first one wasn't the best. The second and third are much more well-written, and the plot gets more intricate/interesting. In my opinion anyway.
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